[p2pu-dev] UX changes - Looks good, but maybe needs copy editing clarity :-)

[João Menezes]

Can't access the link, guess it's still down.

2011/8/30 John Britton <public at johndbritton.com>

> I think Arlton just plucked that copy from other places on the site, agree
> that it needs some work. It's still a work in progress, will post to
> community list in a few more days once we've given things some more thought.
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> On Tue, Aug 30, 2011 at 11:52 AM, Pippa Buchanan <Pippa.Buchanan at gmail.com
> > wrote:
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>> I've just been looking at the sample mockups that Arlton's been
>> working on and it looks great. It really builds on the initial design
>> that Alex made for us in Barcelona and evolves the project look and
>> feel to be more mature.
>>
>> One thing that doesn't seem to work for me is tightly communicating
>> peer learning and the user generated learning part of the project. As
>> the mock up places far more emphasis on the main text block and
>> doesn't have a "Start Your Own" or "Create" button.
>>
>> "Learn anything, with your peers.
>> At P2PU, people work together to learn a particular topic by
>> completing tasks, assessing individual and group work, and providing
>> constructive feedback."
>>
>> Without "Start Your Own" as a high profile button it's REALLY unclear
>> that users are in control of creating the subjects that are offered
>> and are responsible for each others experience.
>>
>> I'm not sure if this a UX problem or some refining of the copy on the
>> front page. Granted - describing peer-learning and participatory
>> culture is pretty difficult to do in a tweet size chunk of text :-)
>>
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