[p2pu-dev] UX changes - Looks good, but maybe needs copy editing clarity :-)

[John Britton]

I think Arlton just plucked that copy from other places on the site, agree
that it needs some work. It's still a work in progress, will post to
community list in a few more days once we've given things some more thought.
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On Tue, Aug 30, 2011 at 11:52 AM, Pippa Buchanan
<Pippa.Buchanan at gmail.com>wrote:

> I've just been looking at the sample mockups that Arlton's been
> working on and it looks great. It really builds on the initial design
> that Alex made for us in Barcelona and evolves the project look and
> feel to be more mature.
>
> One thing that doesn't seem to work for me is tightly communicating
> peer learning and the user generated learning part of the project. As
> the mock up places far more emphasis on the main text block and
> doesn't have a "Start Your Own" or "Create" button.
>
> "Learn anything, with your peers.
> At P2PU, people work together to learn a particular topic by
> completing tasks, assessing individual and group work, and providing
> constructive feedback."
>
> Without "Start Your Own" as a high profile button it's REALLY unclear
> that users are in control of creating the subjects that are offered
> and are responsible for each others experience.
>
> I'm not sure if this a UX problem or some refining of the copy on the
> front page. Granted - describing peer-learning and participatory
> culture is pretty difficult to do in a tweet size chunk of text :-)
>
>
>
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